Valentine’s Present

Sorry for not able to update my main site for so long. I have been caught between many websites and other work.
A year ago, I presented “Unforeseen”, which is a very short love story. For this shitty Valentines’ Day, I shall present to you the preview of my latest story – Lonestar (Can be found in “My Arts”).
In fact I have been working on it for more than a year but I’m forced to set it aside for other work. It is a self thought story, mixed with some true experience of my past. Title and contents are subjected to change any time.
Please give me some feedbacks so that I know if I’m on the right track.